Description: this is just me venting. it's still not helping. tell me what you think. i feel that i'm losing my touch, but oh well. i might just stop posting until i'm inspired again.
all i want to do is run
i want to hide from the pain
i can't handle the way i feel anymore
i want to hurt so many people
and she's the only one who can stop me
we can't be together right now
i want to close this distance
they are holding me back
but what will they do when the time comes
they can't keep me here forever
and i will make sure of that
if running is all i can do
than running is what it has to be
my legs are already tired
i can feel the muscles tense
they are fighting me every last stretch
i will cut this out of my mind
i want to break out
just get away from me
let me take this into my own hands
i want to go home
all i can think of is you
and i'm on my way
Well Chika I disagree with you. It is not that he depends on the other person it is that he turns to the other person. IF you actually read the poem you would have got the stanza: let me take this into my own hands... That is a form of independence and you can't live in a society and not depend on others so becareful how you phase things. While in a relationship you depend on the other person not like in a friendship where you depend on the other person and get nothing. And it is not pressure especially when the other person doesn't do anything to keep him inline and it just happens . But that is my opinion. Now on to the poem. The poem is a great write alot of emotion and feelings in it. Keep up the writing. Love You Ali
the person in this peice seems to be too dependant on another person to stop them from what they dont wnt to do all i can say is grow up and control your own emotions and stop putting so m uch pressure on this other person to keep you in line. it is the fastest way to put the brakes on a relationship if one person is too needy and needs to be kept inline all the time by the other person. personally i think that is pathetic. but that is just me no offense by this it is just what i got from the peice best of luck
Submission Name: running
