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    dots Submission Name: Kismet's Criesdots
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    Author: Tekin_Kashami
    ASL Info:    18/male/Houston, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 131/77/23
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1055
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       For Aaron Early;
    Died September 3rd, 2005, at the age of 6


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    dotsKismet's Criesdots
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    If Death is Fate's mistress
    She serves him quite well
    And yet they must not love
    For she ends all he tells

    Life and it's brevity are lost in cruel chaos
    And Fate's cruel bride is the only reason
    We dance and sing with joy in the spring
    Only to fall to winter's appalling lesions

    Death's cold grip embraces you,
    Never to let go
    So that Fate's true masterpiece
    Is never to show

    So though you have moved on
    Fate's tears still remain
    For he of all people
    Sees you have no great stain

    You stand in Glory's presence
    As Death is severely chastized
    For slaughtering innocence;
    Ending for what glory strived




    Submitted on 2005-10-22 08:54:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Justin
    This one is the most emotional write od yours I have read
    Little Aaron is a very big part of your life and he always will be
    He is sitting in Gods lap waiting patiently for you to reunite with him
    This I am Positive of
    God Bless My Friend
    Please keep in Touch
    Your Friend
    Ron
    I Pray for little Aaron
    | Posted on 2005-12-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      i've never seen a power that showed weakness/faults of the gods quite like this...a great write! some of the rhyming is a little off in the second stanza..work on that, otherwise awesome job
    | Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by kma12790 | [ Reply to This ]


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