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    dots Submission Name: He Seendots
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    Author: hidden_cry
    ASL Info:    16/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 23/25/13
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 173
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 694



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    dotsHe Seendots
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    He seen her with a bandage on her wrist,
    She knew happiness did not exist.
    He seen her cry herself to sleep,
    She knew not what she wanted to keep.
    He seen the pain in her eyes,
    She thought they were all lies.
    He seen why he was there,
    She did not know why he cared.
    He seen her in every light,
    She hated the sight.
    He seen the beauty in her heart,
    She said she fell apart.
    He seen what she had to give,
    She finally had a reason to live.
    He seen the love that they shared,
    She really cared.
    He finally seen the beauitful girl he loved,
    She will be in his arms forever.




    Submitted on 2005-10-22 11:33:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it alot. i feel it through me. i have had experiences like that and its good to know im not alone. this is verry heart felt and well its wonderful. i hope to read more of your writting
    | Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]



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