The title captured my attention and the write itself is very thought provoking. Something we should all take time to do, "see with our heart". "Let your soul speak of beauty and you will never be short of words." < just lovely! The entire poem is inspiring. Nice work! ~Sandra
But, this part threw me off a little bit - Be filled with joy and your heart envisions love.' - just a suggestion but syntactically it kinda sound funny, you know? A slight change to something like - 'Be filled with joy and your heart will envision love. - would iron out that little kink. Just a small thing but I think it would help, don't you?
I found this piece to be holy, simple and pure in its message. A great prayer/mantra to believe and follow. From what I've read of yours, you're definitely a very spiritual, loving person.
Aww, isn't that nice? I think we need more lovely thoughts like this. for I find it hard to come across an inspirational piece that doesn't drip with hallmark cheese. And this one doesn't.
You've written it with enough flair to overcome those cheesy connotations.
Another nice piece from you that I enjoyed, thank you. Peace,
This is a lovely love poem. These words are wonderful and so very true. Seeing with your heart is something everyone should do. The mind can be your worst enemy, too busy thinking all the time. The heart just gives itself unselfishly hoping to have that love returned. I like how you carry the idea from the last line forward into the next stanza. This is an uplifting poem. Too bad more people dont feel this way. The world might be a better, kinder place. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
this is the key to a joyful life, to see with the heart. that is where true beauty lies. and making a prayer out of words is a wonderful concept, something i do try to do in my life. it is a very zen thing to do and made me think of the book "Chop Wood, Carry Water," making everything you do and say a prayer in your day.
beautiful message Chrystine. thanks for sharing this with us.
Very good write. Just like many of the others have said, the first line is the powerful, but to me, I must agree with Ron. The second paragraph is the most powerful. This is going in my favorite list. Peace, TK
"See with your heart and you will have beauty before you." i feel that more people need to be able to see with their heart. i loved your poem. it was short and simple and yet it had a big message to get across.
this is simple and i loved it. allowing yourself to see with your heart. that is harder and harder to do sometimes. finding beauty because of it. is a breath that escapes your lips. "Pray with those words and you will always have joy." very cool. snuff
A new favorite... Thanks for your beautiful words and giving me hope for love to come! My fav lines are " Be filled with joy and your heart envisions love... The thought of my heart envisioning love is a wonderful concept and something I certainly try to do... just have not been very successful Much love, Ella