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    dots Submission Name: Introdots
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    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 898
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1542



    Description:
       Read my journal in my page to understand this, don't comment and be like wtf? just read the journal. take 2 seconds. its not that hard.


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    dotsIntrodots
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    Sophie: There's a happy feeling in your feet when fall is near,

    Robert: There's that tingling in your toes and then goodbye to fears.

    Sophie: It's something they don't know about, it's something they can't see!

    Robert: It's the feeling of my heart changing here right inside of me!

    Sophie and Robert: It's Love! In the leaves and in the branches of the apple trees, seasons change and so do we! I don't want to be alone this season!

    (Sophie and Robert bump into each other back-to-back)

    *spoken*

    R: Oh, my, sorry Miss.

    S:Oh, it's alright, you don't need to be apologizin like that! Get up off the ground, people are starin!

    R: That bothers you?

    S: What business of yours is it if it bothers me?

    R: Well, seeing as I've just about fallen in love with you, I think it is a lot of my business.By the way, I never caught your name.

    S: Sophie. And you are?

    R: I'm Robert. And Sophie, I will meet you on the corner of 7th and Hampshire at 7:00 tomorrow night. Wear your Sunday best.

    S: You expect me to just show up?

    R: Unless you don't like me back.

    Sophie and Robert as they walk towards home: I know she(he) has got to love me now, no way no how, can I(she) not show up, my heart has finally grown up, she's (he's) mine now!




    Submitted on 2005-10-22 16:54:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey guys! erin here. justsayin since i entered new stuff in my journal is that its part of a musical. I hope you like this
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by xmangaXfreakx | [ Reply to This ]
      I couldn't read your journal but this was fun!

    Writing isn't always about the serious, sorrowful and poetic - it's about everyday life and such.

    You have a lot of talent and I'm happy and proud you use it so well!

    Love,Peace,Joy ~ Know,Experience,BE!

    tif
    | Posted on 2005-11-22 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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