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Author:	Seedofbayne
ASL Info:	19/M/MA
Elite Ratio:	3.37 - 55/82/27
Words:	241

Class/Type:	Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
Total Views:	287
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	1605

Description:
this was by a girl names jessica homen...a friend who is new and wants to get her stuff out.

by: jessica Homen dots

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The Blade Is Your Friend

So you say you have a broken heart
Well I guess that that is a start
No more lies, I'm caught up in this

Just let me cut so
you won't have to
It will be easier
if I inflict the pain on you.

This time
There will be laughter
No More
Bitter causes
I can't
take the tears no more...

Please leave me alone
I've helped enough
Just go home

So you say you have a broken heart.
Well honey you have no idea
Every time we kiss its like there's nothing there.
So there's nothing to fear.

Just let me cut
So you won't have to
Just tell me where
And I will help you

Please just leave me now
your heart is just to cold
I can't take anymore
please just go
please just go

Too many memories
make it hard to breathe
just make it stop
leave me now
leave me now

Watch me sitting here
why is life so unfair
the blade cuts through your skin
I guess that now I win
Now I win

I read between the lines
and I guess now I'm fine
Now I'll just watch you die
(watch you die...watch you die...)

I'm sorry I was scared
can't help you now you're dead
my life is filled with dread
I'm alone
I'm alone now...

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||| Comments |||
Yes I definately agree, the whole time I was reading this it felt like lyrics. It's a bit patchy and I can't say I can exactly to relate to this- it's rather too morbid for me. But I did enjoy reading it, each part was well written even if the parts didn't seem to fit together all that well.
| Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by dark-red-pain | [ Reply to This ]
With a few fixes to the text, you could actually call this lyrics to a song rather than poetry. But that is exactly what it sounds like, a song. A song about death. Very well written.
Peace, TK
| Posted on 2005-10-22 00:00:00 | by ThomasKane | [ Reply to This ]

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