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    dots Submission Name: What is Okdots
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    Author: hidden_cry
    ASL Info:    16/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.74 - 23/25/13
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 147
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       I just wanted to if anyone feels this way, or what does ok mean to you.


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    She said it was ok,
    Ok what does Ok mean,
    Does it mean shes happy,
    Does it mean shes sad,
    Ok in what world would she be consider Ok,

    Ok is what you tell people,
    When you dont want to tell them how bad things are,
    Ok is what you say,
    When there is nothing to say.

    She said she was Ok,
    How can she be Ok,
    When the blood drips down from her wrist,
    When she cries out at night,
    When she cuts to make the pain go away.

    How can she be Ok,
    When nothing in her life works out,
    When every man in her life hurts her,
    When all she see's is pain.

    In what ways is she Ok,
    She tells people she's Ok,
    Do you know what Ok means?




    Submitted on 2005-10-22 22:51:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really liked this poem...I can relate to it in so many ways... When reading this poem I was very near tears the entire time...
    I think that O.K. is what you say when you either don't know how you feel or you don't want others to know...
    I really liked the concept of this poem...I liked how you explored the different meanings of the words O.K.
    This was a wonderful poem...very good job...

    farewell...
    jessie
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by jessie thomas | [ Reply to This ]
      wow that one hit well it makes u think about what ppl r really saying when they say ok, its sad because most ppl are in denial about what they are feeling and this ends up hurting every else more. i liked it.
    ...Sarah...
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by my pain | [ Reply to This ]
      in a sense, its crystal clear and yet hard to understand. After having thought about the message this write carries...all i came up with is that, 'Ok' is not always an honest answer. There are situations where saying 'im ok' is the first thing that comes out of our mouth when it is not really what we want to say. But...thats just how i see it. Anyway, great write! really made me think ^_^
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Fallen One | [ Reply to This ]



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