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    dots Submission Name: Special Daughter OF Minedots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 318
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 190
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    Bytes: 2144



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       My step daughter who I have come to love as my own


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    dotsSpecial Daughter OF Minedots
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    Her early twenties when we first met.
    A Special young lady I could tell.
    Her heart so heavy
    with burden and pain.
    Mind full of anticipation
    raising two small boys alone.

    Courageous young woman
    curing herself of the evil substance
    that over came her very soul.
    Wanting to raise her sons,
    in the clear light of Gods love.

    Strong willed and minded
    wanting to be a good mom,
    daughter and friend.
    Accepting the challenges
    the world throws her way.

    Everyday facing addictions
    she excised from her body.
    Demons fighting to get back in control.
    Not once giving in to their world.
    Yet days of wanting to give up,
    haunted her fragile heart and soul.
    Causing her to reach deep into the abyss of
    her very being,
    grabbing the strength that waited.

    Overcoming obstacles that threaten to bind her.
    Learning to respect and love herself again
    with help from her special friends.

    We are so proud of her and her victories.
    Tears welling up in our eyes as we watched
    her receive her nursing diploma.

    Victorious in many ways.
    Our special daughter has won
    her first battles of life and motherhood.

    New battles shall come her way,
    Loving husbands love and support,
    her Shield of Protection.

    Armed with knowledge and strength
    as her Mighty Sword
    shall slay the evil that threatens to get in her way.

    Even though I didn’t born her
    My love for her is so great,
    My heart aches,
    when she is in pain.
    My heart rejoices in her joys.

    On her wedding day I was so
    proud to be her mom.
    My eyes tear up today
    remembering the beauty
    of our precious daughter.
    Never have I seen such beauty
    radiating from within.

    Thanking God everyday
    for this Special Daughter of mine.
    I love you Jami






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      All I can say is beautiful and very emotional. Sounds like your (daughter) has struggled to get where she is today and for this you should be proud, as well as she should. She has held her head up and fought lives troubles head on and seen the beauty of the other side. Bravo to her! Your love shines through here, as well.
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my what a wonderful piece, written from the heart with so much love, felt in every word... Yes the flow could be a bit better, but I can tell these word flowed straight from your heart, so nothing else matters... She is a very lucky daughter to have such love around her... Thank you for sharing your feelings with us... Desi
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Desi | [ Reply to This ]
      Another very emotive and well writen piece from you. Written with tons of passion and the deepest love possible - that was clear to see !
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      hey, woah i can't beleive nobody commented they're pretty dumb. i like it, it's really good.
    I wrote a new poem, i'll probably end up printing it out and showing it to you.
    but the flow could have used some work, besides that all is good. keep up the work mommy
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]



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