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    dots Submission Name: Forgotten.dots
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    Author: Kwanying
    ASL Info:    22/F/Denmark
    Elite Ratio:    2.1 - 23/29/13
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Dark
    Total Views: 190
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 437



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    dotsForgotten.dots
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    What is this,
    that we have forgotten.
    It is very important,
    but still I can not remember.
    These words are long gone,
    lost in an ancient time.
    This I know.

    Is that what is wrong,
    that we have forgotten them.
    Or is it because,
    we forgot the reason behind them.
    I cant recall anymore,
    my mind is so weak and so old.
    I have lost the battle...




    Submitted on 2005-10-23 05:40:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i dont know what to say just I LIKE UR POEMS :D
    they are really good ..i`ll add it 2 my favs ;)
    | Posted on 2006-04-05 00:00:00 | by mystic_angel | [ Reply to This ]
      This was pretty well written, but in a couple of parts you really lost the flow. I think you should work a little bit more on this caze it has so many great things in it!
    | Posted on 2005-10-25 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
      im addin this one to my favs! this one reminded me of a poem that i wrote that is posted on here! good job!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-07-15 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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