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A Circle. -------------------------------------------
Far away from here,
someone lost a tear.
In this minut someone died,
but in the same minut someone is born.
Im sad,
but Im also glad.
It will never end,
or at leest I doubt it will.
Its kind of like the star of five,
its the circle of life.
kind of confusing but not really. i really liked your write. good job on it. it was also really clear.. i wuldnt hav changed anything about this Christin69
Submission Name: A Circle.
