Letter To Myself
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this is a letter from my know it all self to my poetic self....it's how i think my writers block come on...tell me what you think...
Letter To Myself
Hello how are you doing oh yea i forgot it i forgot that you are just another suicidal bitch the one who reps Newark, New Jearsy and has a real smart mouth and had to hold her breath when she moved down south Hello how are you Oh i forgot once more i forgot that you're just another suicidal whore with cuts on her arm been in the world too damn long but hey i should've known you'd play the same ole song dear me..shit did you just cuss me out when i'm the one who brought poetry out of your damn mouth i may be a suicidal bitch even a suicidal whore just know that i ain't doing shit for you no more peace... |
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| I liked this one too...it had a bit more of a rapish feel than I am used to...it's origional...so thats good. I liked the concept of writing a letter to yourself... Very good job on this poem. ...jessie thomas... | Posted on 2005-11-14 00:00:00 | by jessie thomas | [ Reply to This ] | okay... well this is something on..... yourself insulting yourself.... ans that is unusual.... so ok... hmmmm can't say alot on this cause It aint my categorie... letters... =S ok, anyway It aint my favorite but continue, and lets hope(I hope) that U'll continue in poetry and not letter... lol... Jearsy... hmmm Jersey? maybe... anyway I dont have a lot to say on this... hmmm piece of hmmm. [censored]? lol anyway aint my style maybe thats why... so anyway continue | | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Wolfeye_666 | [ Reply to This ] | This is a really great piece its something i would write and i like reading things like this it sort of contributes to what i think about. It was a cool idea how you used the letter to your self its like your talking to your self but your writing it down well keep writing. ~kat~ | | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by inuyasha_s girl | [ Reply to This ] | WOW. I enjoyed this a lot. I've written letters to myself before, but I don't think I've ever written back. I should try that sometime. This poem was both fascinating and inspiring, thank you. Keep it up! | {Kate} | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Jester_Gesture | [ Reply to This ] | Okay, at the end, peace is totally unnessescary. It seems much more like a war raging within your soul, and peace is nowhere in sight. | You shouldn't EVER let yourself write letters to itself, instead, use discussion. You've given us one side of the story, and I'd like to hear more. I am a stickler for punctuation and grammar, and I think this poem really needs it. Everyone writes their poems in lowercase, and for no good reason; It really doesn't help, it just discourages me from continuing. Tekin Kashami | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by Tekin_Kashami | [ Reply to This ] | |
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