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    dots Submission Name: Living codedots
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    Author: Bloomsbury Set
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 51/35/11
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This is a combination of metaphor for life and some added humour. Its a rough idea I came up with.


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    dotsLiving codedots
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    Today I started to create
    Java programs.
    Like my life I need to
    plan it, design it and do it.

    I try to understand the logic.
    of the words of the screen
    I grow Frustrated I feel like
    I want to scream

    The If statement I understand
    It tells the program
    The correct response
    To a certain input
    Like the way we have to think
    Before reacting to a situation




    Submitted on 2005-10-23 17:19:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      a poem about a computer java program...that is slightly frightening...what would inspire you to compare that to anyhting or why would doing that inspire you to write poem...I guess I'm too in to love poetry
    | Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by tinkerbellsas | [ Reply to This ]
      ehheh its geek poety! h@XX0r m@ /`/

    `/`/ /-/ @ t j0 1) 0 `/`/1 t c0/`/`p z, 13 1 1 @ c 1-1?

    yeah lifes java. comps ARE life, and life is comp.

    ctrl-alt-del...
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by dublhelix | [ Reply to This ]
      this was ok! i understood wat u were trying to say but i think there is a better way to say it! make it more deep! dont tell ppl wat your doing immeadieatly lead ppl to ur conclusiong but otherwise it was good at least i cold understand it!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-10-23 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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