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    dots Submission Name: Sometimesdots
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    Author: OrenroccA
    ASL Info:    17/M/Virgina
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 29/38/18
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 374
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 344



    Description:
       There i fixed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSometimesdots
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    Sometimes you just don't understand
    you say things that tear my heart in two
    Sometimes my soul burns with hate
    And i wish i was never born
    and sometimes you bring joy to me with just a simple kiss.
    sometimes you uplift my soul and it is you I miss!!!
    This is how you make me feel......Sometimes.




    Submitted on 2004-04-19 21:18:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its a good start i would make it longer so the repition wasn't so umm repitive, its a good start and on line 3 should that be sometimes not sometomes?? great start
    ~*~Pryncesss
    | Posted on 2004-04-19 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]



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