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Belief In An Angel

Author: Munchie_1226
ASL Info:    25/F/E.STL
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I began musing on this when I read my sister's journal post this morning. About something I said a long time ago to her. I guess you can say she touched my poetic heart and mind this morning.

Sis...this a for you. Well, for us.

Sometimes it's hard to believe, hard to understand why things in our life are the way they are. But, sometimes, you overlook what you are provided with and choose not to value it.

Always have faith.

Much love.

Li Li

Belief In An Angel

"If you are an angel,
Where are your wings?
Where is your dance,
And the songs you sing?

"Where is the halo,
That hangs on your head?
How many times have you knelt with me,
At the side of my bed?"

"Have you heard all my prayers?
If so, why no resolution?
Why do I still seem alone,
In a world filled with pollution?

"Where is my protection?
Where are the miracles you supply?
I try to live life with confidence,
But I am still hardly getting by."

"It's not that I've lost faith,
I want you to know I still believe.
Yet as you stand before me,
There's many things I can't perceive."

"So young my child,
Wanting to know so much.
I can't believe all this time,
You never felt my touch."

"The nights by your bed,
I held you while you cried.
Any affection you were missing,
I tried to provide."

"You question my halo,
My wings, song, and dance.
Questioned why,
Your life hasn't advanced."

"But open your eyes,
And accept what you see.
For God hears you speak,
And he knows you believe."

"He's given you health,
A life, and even a child.
He's been there through your tears,
And every time you've smiled."

"You're protected from evil,
Your miracles are before you each day.
More will come in your future,
If you continue to pray."

"I am with you always,
Never will I leave your side.
When you can't see me stand before you,
It's in your heart I reside."

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  This reminds me of the 'Footprints' poem I've heard and seen (in one form or another) at almost every Christian bookstore throughout the country: 'Where are you God? Always been here, child'. Sounds as if you felt emotional/spritual support at just the right moment and passed it along to someone else in need of an uplift. "Freely ye have received, freely give" is what God would want you (and your sister) to remember. "I have loved you with an everlasting love" is the theme of this write, as the author of the work, take that to heart. Wish you the best, young lady.
| Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
  that's the lili i've been looking for... i really enjoyed this, because of it what it says... and furthermore... what it means.. I'm not gonna fill this box with all kinds of BS lol just gonna tell you i really f***ing love it and its a FAVE...
| Posted on 2005-10-29 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]
  this was really tight. a lot of the time we complain about life without realizing in all actuality we've been blessed. i see ur sister liked this just as much as i did. this is going on my fave list to. good job
| Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  absolutely beautiful li li... i think that's exactly what an angel would say if it was to speak to us... you sure you didn't have some help writing this?? just kidding... i'm definitely adding this to my favorites.

| Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
  I have been kinda going through the same thing and questioning my faith. I feel like your sister and don't know where to go. I will fav this and maybe I will be able find my way out. Great write!
| Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by homie1065 | [ Reply to This ]

this is one of the most beautiful and heartfelt poems Ive ever read

It reminds me a lot of footprints
My mothers favorite poem of all time

I am adding this to my favorites A Great Job

Take Care
| Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  that's awesome. i'm glad u wrote that for her because i know she needed it. well written, good narrative flow, and a very sincere and sweet message. great job.
| Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ]
  I wish I could find that faith sis... I really do...I dont know if I just truly dont belive anymore or if I'm just so overwhelmed that I dont remember what shelf I put faith on...all I know is I dont have it...I dont believe in anything...

This one is going to my favs so that I can read it for encouragement...I'm on the bottom looking up...and though it's dark down here I just want to tell you that you are that spark of light at the top I'm aiming towards your brightness...

Love ya sis...

| Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
  First thing, I wanted to thank you for commenting on nearly ALL my poems. I really appreciate that. For some, reason, this is the first one I clicked on when I got to your page and Im glad I did. Because if this is an indication of what your other works are like...then Im hyped up and ready to read. This can really help somebody through and turn somebody's beliefs around. Good job. Inspirational in a variety of ways...I liked it alot...and once again...thank you
| Posted on 2005-11-15 00:00:00 | by PrettyRicki | [ Reply to This ]

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