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    dots Submission Name: She Saiddots
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    Author: OrenroccA
    ASL Info:    17/M/Virgina
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 29/38/18
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsShe Saiddots
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    She said "I love you"
    She said "I want to marry you"
    She said "I've never loved you

    Why...did he fall for her?
    Why...didn't he see what was going on?
    Why...is he now heartbroken
    Why...did she do this?

    He said "I love you too"
    He said "I want to marry you too"
    He said "Why?"




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      Love... is a very broken subject, love is hard to find, and when you find your first love, you should never let her go, sounds to me, the lady in this poem, wasn't in love, but lust, never mistake love for lust, its not easy, and I bid you good luck
    | Posted on 2004-04-20 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]



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