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    dots Submission Name: Searching for Peacedots
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    Author: Big J
    ASL Info:    22/m/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 20/29/12
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsSearching for Peacedots
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    oh that furry that hath no end,
    Attacking forward among brother and friend.
    Take the hill, take the hill they call,
    Fighting forth to save us all.

    All, all in limbo 'tween heaven and hell,
    Advancing forth as a terrible swell.
    Bloody faces and frozen tears,
    Taking vengence for oppresive years.

    Years, years of bllod all around,
    Bodies heaped upon the ground.
    Battle cries no longer heard,
    Silence, silence not a word.

    Not a word, not a word of peace,
    For the hate shall never cease.
    In this world void of grace,
    Filled with anger based on race.

    Race, race, why must we look,
    Why must we judge the cover of the book.
    Where is the joy, where is the love,
    Why must we mock the power above.

    Above, above all tears,
    Blocking out man's jhorrific fears.
    Peace, the peace we must find,
    Solely exists in the human mind.




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