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    dots Submission Name: Conundrumdots
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    Author: Tekin_Kashami
    ASL Info:    18/male/Houston, Texas
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 131/77/23
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 930
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 886



    Description:
       For you, murdering ass hole Saddam Hussein.


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    dotsConundrumdots
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    Stains of blood
    Immortal
    Stains of blood
    Eternal
    Move on(.org)?
    How?
    Forget?
    Forsake?
    Abandon?
    Deny?
    Stains of blood
    Glistening
    Stains of blood,
    Human blood

    He let them die
    In anger and greed
    He yelled “Insh Allah!”
    Evil?
    Shadenfruede?
    Demonic?
    They tell us,
    “It’s over.”
    “Let him go.”
    But why give mercy
    When he had none?

    Turn the other cheek
    And he will pepper it
    With cowardice
    Murder
    Rape
    And Jihad

    Let him continue
    And all will be lost
    “Insh Allah”
    “Insh Allah”
    Let the blood dry
    And out liberty
    Will vanish

    Crush his bones
    And we change
    Into him and his menace




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    ||| Comments |||
      I can feel your sadness and your pain as I read this
    Im Sorry
    know that life may be painful at times but there is a silver lining at the end of the tunnel
    Stay as positive as you are you will only grow in the love you have surronding you
    Take Care
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I can see where your coming from and where your going with it. Its will writen and captures emotion almost symbolic. Keep it the way it is.
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by Stinkywizlteats | [ Reply to This ]


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