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    dots Submission Name: Down Againdots
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    Author: Raped_of_Faith
    ASL Info:    16/female/Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       I wrote this a few years ago.. during a long hard road out of drugs... In the begining it was an even more depressing time quiting the drugs then being involved with them.. Too many memories... to many unsolved crap...... to many things I did that I wish I could take back.... I had nothing left to do but think .. of the live I had wasted away for so many years....


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    dotsDown Againdots
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    I've been pushed down so many times
    I feel this will be the last
    As I lay here fading
    My thoughts are invented by the memories of my past
    I feel the pressures of shame and rejection building
    As I lay here on the floor
    I have no strength to get up
    I'm not worth it anymore.....




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      i beleive we have all felt like this at one time or another... there is a value in everyone... without any of us... there would be an impact on everyone around you... everyone you ever came in contact with... no matter how small the impact... i beleive we all live for our own little purposes... usually either responsibility or guilt... but there is good... you just need to work for it... i am getting sidetracked... i enjoyed your poem... and it made alot of sense to me... enjoy
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ]
      ohhh but you are worth it. Keep the mind free from unwanted space invaders. Keep the pen a scriblin' and in the end it all works out, I can promise you that...
    | Posted on 2005-10-24 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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