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    dots Submission Name: Resurrectiondots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 262
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 925
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1758



    Description:
       Been doing a lot of stuff locally... Hadn't been on here in a while.. And to be honest, if you have never like any of my "real" stuff.. you prlly aint gonna like this one.. It's to the point.. not worrying about grammar, not worrying about censoring..

    AND NO, THIS IS NOT ABOUT ANYBODY ON HERE.. I'M NOT TRYING TO START SHIT..

    To much to worry bout, besides some little stupid internet beef...
    so take it as you want.. thanks for reading

    And people, please don't get confused between freestyle rap.. and teen angst/venting...



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    dotsResurrectiondots
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    Gonna make this song cry
    This pen keeps describing my battle cry
    You try and die
    You die to try
    To roll it up
    To squash it out
    Quick to get hit in the fucking mouth
    Censorship, for what?
    Knuck if you buck
    I still don't give a damn
    And I never gave a fuck

    Back in the game back in full form
    How the fuck they read my words
    And judge where I'm from?
    Gotta entertain, ordained
    to sustain, the wind or the rain
    From these bitches and dez hurricanes
    I think about grammar with a blunt and a smile
    Time in the slammer I've walked that mile
    Take the self pity and pitiful excuses
    Leaning off the bottle,
    Morphing these words, fucking abusive
    Suclusive
    to these streets
    All these little bitches suddenly dodging me

    I'm taken this mic
    Like Z, This fucking song's gonna cry
    Making truth outta lies
    Freestyle competition
    Got the crowd's heart crying over
    what they been missing
    Acapella worse than a goodfella
    Got the shit over, it's down,
    Catch me in the corner, sipping
    Better yet, lemme catch you slipping

    Bitching about who is this
    And what he gonna do
    I keep hearing dat barking
    But where's your fucking crew
    Bitch it's over, you through
    Nothing to go war with
    It's over and done with
    There aint nothing I can't come with
    Ears in the street
    always telling me some shit
    keep talking that talk
    And you gon' see how much I run with






    Submitted on 2005-10-24 23:17:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      How much you run with huh? Huh?

    You are really doing a great job at freestyling. You seem to have the rhythm under control and know how to talk "ghetto". LOL

    Keep up the work boy! You have a talent that should not go ignored.

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      alright, i see u can still freestyle as well as ever. but i'm still waiting for everybody to get back and get back on the grind. DYR will never faulter we just gotta adjust. u used a lotta references to "song cry". is that one of your favorite songs. i think that phrase is kinda synonimous to letting "the ink bleed". anyway, good job cade. if u don't have a comp, i hope u get one. i wanna read hot [censored] like this more often.
    | Posted on 2005-10-25 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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