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    dots Submission Name: A Blue Fridaydots
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    Author: Abort_Chaotic
    ASL Info:    19 almost 20
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 201/172/50
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 786
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1596



    Description:
       uh yeah, another by me. if you read it you could probably get what i'm trying to say in it.
    oh well i'm really tired it's like 1:31 am and blah!
    i just wrote it, thanks bye.


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    dotsA Blue Fridaydots
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    I'll bury my smile in that graveyard,
    pieces of my heart might die away,
    Emotions in disarray.
    With depression dancing aimlessly in our faces,
    to pavement warm with screams,
    tonight please die for unwept dreams.
    With a different act,
    I'll tune it out,
    All dried happiness, I'll gladly accept the dought.
    Black and frowning, too abstract.
    Apologetic rifts of a lively symphonic display.
    The feelings I ever had for you were left to decay.
    The day after Thursday.
    ..why do I keep writing this about you
    stop consuming my thoughts, showing you have no clue
    you are now of the hated this
    final thought will be consummated
    you never looked so lovely in blue.
    it never stops half way through..

    this will be the key
    for you and me today
    to paths and just be.

    another verse here,
    suffocate to blue you die,
    know it's here we lie.

    this will be the key,
    suffocate for me today,
    to paths where you die.

    radiant with blue,
    enough for two.
    her eyes,
    dead lies,
    her smile,
    so hostile,
    her tongue,
    she'll die young.

    stark and brilliant in red,
    I still cry saphire for you.
    No death befor bed.
    Forgiveness is over due.

    -I don't hate you-
    -I don't love you-

    Fictitious and viscous how our first
    always hurts the worst.




    Submitted on 2005-10-25 00:45:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Cool. I like what you've written. I admit, I don't really get it, but I can still appreciate it, right? I love the:
    'Fictitious and viscous how our first
    always hurts the worst.'
    Sorry for the crappy comment, this piece deserves so much more than I can say about it but I'm seriously sleep deprived right now. (3 days and counting, whoo-hoo!) So, yeah, sorry but keep up your writing!

    -jess
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by wildchild | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow I m not sure what to say. Its good. But sounds depressing. The format was different. Is this somthing you wanted to do or is it some type of format. You didnt use alot of words that I couldnt understand. I could understand this write of yours. Love you Justin
    Your mom
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]


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