O wow...I know we're not supposed to say I relate so well..but I relate so well! Your words in this poem have been my life for like 3 years! My boyfriend just got back from Iraq...and I felt this everyday...sometimes you miss someone so much it's ubearable..and the only time you feel any kind of connection is when you meet that person in your dreams. I just loved this...great job. This is definitely fave. Awesome job. ~hailie~
This is a very touching poem that captures the essence of longing so well. How difficult this must be to love and need someone so much who cannot be by your side. You have expressed your feelings so well in this poem. I have never been in this situation myself, so I cant say I can relate firsthand but I can say I know what it feels to love and miss someone very much and my heart goes out to you. It is indeed an awful feeling, an emptiness, but it sounds as if this situation is temporary and you will have your love back in time. I imagine it feels like an eternity. This is a very good heartfelt poem. Take care.
beautiful write, i started to tear up a little at the end! its a great piece that is short and consiece, but allows the reader to feel the whole rang of emotions at the same time. i can understand the feeling of seperation from a loved one (being away from all of my family and friends while i'm at school), and i this poem really made me think of all the nights where i fall asleep just thinking of the next time i'll get to see them and all of the things i want to say to them, and the experience i want to share with them. a great write, i really enjoyed this piece! have a nice day!
A heartfelt poem expressing true love I really enjoyed it you were able to express how much you truefuuly love this person Keep praying as I have a funny feeling your prayer will be answered Remain positive Take Care Ron
This work reminded me of the many places I have been in my lifetime...sometimes looking out over a sea...or even at a moon...and wondering how someone was doing far away...thinking of love shared...this is such a personal and special work...my favorite type of writings...this so much speaks of your love of him and how much you truly long and miss him... "I miss you more than you値l ever know"...speaks this so well...and this one line...a beautiful ending..."But I値l see you in my dreams tonight" to this work. ~Alan