Description: This was sorta inspired by my sister Raivn and how her relationship with this guy goes. It is like what happened to her and well I don't know...it sounds like a punk song to me...like maybe Garbage or something.
I really am that sad, aren't I? Me and jessie have the best present ever for your birthday. You're going to love us all to pieces. This is great. It makes me sad. I'm trying to stay away from him, but he keeps trying to pull me back in. I mentioned meeting this guy this weekend to him (and I didn't mention that he has a girlfriend) and he's all like, "Who's this cool guy you were talking about?" and following me around, and coming to talk to me on all of our breaks. I'm just like, "God, leave me alone!" I love that part about cutting my hair for him. It's the damn truth.
yeah i cut my hair off recently too i don't know why. but it's growing back. i thought it wouldn't. but it is growing back in nicely. no i didn't shave it. losing your virginity is something everyone goes through at some point . . . i goes a few don't . . . but some have the luck of actually sharing it with someone who really appreciates them and some don't. the blood thing was a good touch.
I liked this a lot. I like the repitition of the line 'it was lovely now your're ugly' It does sound a lot like the relationship between Tony and Raivn. So very good job descibing that. Over all I must say that I loved this poem. It was very well written. Oh and guess what? I dyed my hair..mabangs really...they are purple again.