Description: This poem is about love losing that love and tyring to rebuild .
You are -------------------------------------------
You are my love
You are my life
you are leaving me to die
you are indescriable
When you said you loved me I cried and listened to your heart beat
When you touched me I quivered
when you kissed me I shivered
You are who I lived for
I still love you Jon
Wow thats increadible i can realate to what your feeling even if im a guy ive got a x who i feel like that for n im sorry to hear bout that n i hope it gets better but keep up the good work
am sorry to hear about that...this is a very nice poem...you express yourself very well:) don't get what I am about to say wrong I am not usually a super cheery preppy [censored] but in ur description ...where u appologized...don't ever be sorry for how ur feeling and how you show it...you could write all poems about him and there are going to be people who read them what ever helps u and as long as it's helping u is all that really matters. in any case nice write. keep writng.take care. Peace
Ok, I just wrote that and it just occurred to me how lame that sounded. I mean I obviously don't know you and I don't know Jon. Funnily though, I truly am sorry. It's almost an absolute miracle that you find the love of your life and an even bigger miracle that they like you back. I think it's tragic that you lost that love to a senseless accident.
It's worse that you got left behind to live the life for two of you. If you believe in after-life maybe it would be of some comfort to know that maybe Jon is waiting for you by heaven's door.
Submission Name: You are
