Chill. Amazing, even your stuff about death, is inspirational; now that takes mad skill! Of course, I've a diferent view on death than most anyways. I don't see it as dark, bleak; and filled with suffering and misery. More like you, I see it as a release from life. A gift, our reward for serving our purpose. Our bodys are what hold our souls captive, and it is in death that we are freed. Of, course that's just my take. But it beets burning eternally, right? Thanx, for a piece of beauty in a world filled with such ugliness.
This is a lovely poem. How interesting this is that you dreamed of something like this. Death is a mystery to us all and I hope there is a better place to find when I die. This prose is nicely written and I really like the style you use. It gives a sort of free feeling as I read it. Hopefully death will be a freeing experience but I dont want to find out too soon haha! Very nicely written and comforting to read. Take care.
That was cool. I never have dreams like that. My dreams are alwayz stupid, and everyone always dies (dont ask). Well... anywayz this was a really cool poem. I thought the format was good and the wording was perfect. I really liked this part Your soul tis not damaged only bruised... because it kinda lets people know that your not really to the point of no return. ya know, what I mean??? Yeah well... Good job. it was a really nice write.
I love poems that are inspired by dreams, they are so cool. I like this one, the format of the writing itself was interesting, almost as if you're trying to show us what happened by the way the poem was set up. Hmmm, well, I like, good job.