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    dots Submission Name: Dedicated to "HIM"dots
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    Author: POETRY
    ASL Info:    17/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 259/141/37
    Words: 374
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 305
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1959



    Description:
       This is dedicated to a guy named eric he he came into my life after a big bad break up that effected me pretty bad and he was there..and well I fell for him which I think I shouldnt have because I gave him hopes and I dont want him to hate me for it I do love him but I dont know I am still hurt and I dont want to hurt other people on the way. So I hope you like it.


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    dotsDedicated to "HIM"dots
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    There was this guy I met and he would tell me
    How much he loved me
    But with the events that took place in my past relationships
    I could never trust again
    So how could I believe
    That he really loved me

    This guy I was with once before
    I loved him and it was him whom I adored
    He told me day after day
    Of his feelings and how he'd hope I'd feel the same way
    And I did I loved him with all of my heart
    But later on I finally realized he didnt really love me and it tore my heart apart

    When this special guy came around
    He tried to pick me up when I was down
    He take all my worries and threw them away
    and I fell for him day after day

    I told him what happened with my past boyfriend
    How I gave him everything and yet it all came to an end
    How we planed to spend the rest of our lives together
    But he decided to leave me for her

    He told me that he was wrong to do such a thing
    It was a waste cause I gave up anything and everything
    As time past I would talk to this guy who soo became my friend
    I fell in love with him
    Even though it is wrong
    I fell for him, his sweetness and his charm

    I told him there could never be anything
    Between us because I was already in love
    I hurt this guy that was only trying to be a friend maybe even more
    I didnt mean to play with his heart
    I was just so confused on how he played a big part
    He played a big part in my life
    I never knew that for him I woud fall
    Yet I did and now I cant believe that we came t
    This far

    I love you baby
    And you dont know how much you have changed me
    If only you could see
    The love I have gained for you
    This love is so true







    Submitted on 2005-10-25 18:49:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Christina...i'm reading this in school right now and i'm trying my hardest to hold the tears back its so fricken beuatifull...i love it...and baby i love you to...srry i haven't been able to talk to you...but i'll try and find a way to gtg now though periods ending bye
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Draco | [ Reply to This ]



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