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Dedicated to "HIM"

Author: POETRY
ASL Info:    17/f/az
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This is dedicated to a guy named eric he he came into my life after a big bad break up that effected me pretty bad and he was there..and well I fell for him which I think I shouldnt have because I gave him hopes and I dont want him to hate me for it I do love him but I dont know I am still hurt and I dont want to hurt other people on the way. So I hope you like it.

Dedicated to "HIM"

There was this guy I met and he would tell me
How much he loved me
But with the events that took place in my past relationships
I could never trust again
So how could I believe
That he really loved me

This guy I was with once before
I loved him and it was him whom I adored
He told me day after day
Of his feelings and how he'd hope I'd feel the same way
And I did I loved him with all of my heart
But later on I finally realized he didnt really love me and it tore my heart apart

When this special guy came around
He tried to pick me up when I was down
He take all my worries and threw them away
and I fell for him day after day

I told him what happened with my past boyfriend
How I gave him everything and yet it all came to an end
How we planed to spend the rest of our lives together
But he decided to leave me for her

He told me that he was wrong to do such a thing
It was a waste cause I gave up anything and everything
As time past I would talk to this guy who soo became my friend
I fell in love with him
Even though it is wrong
I fell for him, his sweetness and his charm

I told him there could never be anything
Between us because I was already in love
I hurt this guy that was only trying to be a friend maybe even more
I didnt mean to play with his heart
I was just so confused on how he played a big part
He played a big part in my life
I never knew that for him I woud fall
Yet I did and now I cant believe that we came t
This far

I love you baby
And you dont know how much you have changed me
If only you could see
The love I have gained for you
This love is so true

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  Christina...i'm reading this in school right now and i'm trying my hardest to hold the tears back its so fricken beuatifull...i love it...and baby i love you to...srry i haven't been able to talk to you...but i'll try and find a way to gtg now though periods ending bye
| Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Draco | [ Reply to This ]

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