I really liked this...it most definitely emphasises the wondering and has a questioning tone when i read it...i guess it could read as either a big heartache and if that is where it was written from then i feel your sadness and can empathise...and/or from a bemusement point of view which is still sad but it also has a shake your head type of a feeling to it...i guess what i mean is a wonderment like when you shake your head at someones way and think oh my i wonder about you sometimes...lol i hope all that makes sense...and then it is nicely concluded with all that you are left to do is wonder and thats all you will ever do about this person as will your heart...very nicely written :)
Oh how my heart wonders. And wonders it shall. That is all itíll do, Forever with you.
I liked this It was very sad AllI can say is I have read a lot of your poems and your newer poems express a more positive and happy outlook on life I am happy that writing is healping you heal from what ails you Keep writing
Questions of love...we've all had them...this is what this work makes me think of reading it...I found myself recently asking similar questions with a girl who is now 1300 miles away while we were together. Well written and takes you in wanting to continue...otherwords good flow of words. ~Alan