Because in your arms is my home... Has anyone said a more true line. It really seems that way sometimes doesn't it? And then your home just disappears, and you're left not knowing what to do... I like this piece.
This seems written for someone. Am I right? If so, the person should really read it. My advice would be to do a spell check before you post again, this kind of error simply shouldn't happen as it distracts from the piece. Otherwise, nicely done.
This is a good poem for an apology. It sucks when you say things that you regret later. They always say that words dont hurt but I have always disagreed with that. Words hurt very much and the worst part is once they are said they are forever heard. You cant suck them back into your mouth and I have been there...I know! They create such bad feelings and even after you have apologized, they still are never truly forgotten. One spelling error noted with "tare" should be "tear" otherwise a very sincere and sad kinda poem. I hope it worked out for the best for you. Take care.