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    dots Submission Name: Think About Itdots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
    Total Views: 1158
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    Description:
       Tell me what u think honest to "whatever" u believe in.


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    dotsThink About Itdots
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    To realize
    >The value of a sister
    >Ask someone
    >Who doesn't have one
    >
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of ten years:
    >Ask a newly
    >Divorced couple.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of four years:
    >Ask a graduate.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of one year:
    >Ask a student who
    >Has failed a final exam.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of nine months:
    >Ask a mother who gave birth to a stillborn.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of one month:
    >Ask a mother
    >who has given birth to
    >A premature baby.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of one week:
    >Ask an editor of a weekly newspaper.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of one minute:
    >Ask a person
    >Who has missed the train, bus or plane.
    >
    >To realize
    >The value of one-second:
    >Ask a person
    >Who has survived an accident.
    >
    >To realize the value of a friend or family member:
    >LOSE ONE.
    >
    >Time waits for no one.
    >
    >Treasure every moment you have.
    >
    >You will treasure it even more when
    >you can share it with someone special.
    >
    >





    Submitted on 2005-10-26 18:30:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This [censored] was [censored] awesome! ! ! When I read it, I was thinking about some of the same things. I've lost and left many people throughout my life, so this poem to me was like my creed. I truly enjoyed reading this poem, and it definetly make me think and realize how blessed I really am. Job well done.
    | Posted on 2005-11-23 00:00:00 | by K-Beezy | [ Reply to This ]
      man, this is deep. it has really got me thinking. time never waits for us. that is true. i wonder what it'll be like if time really did wait for us?

    suzi
    | Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by sushi wok | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi

    This really comes from your deepest thoughts; it talks abut time. Some people don`t take the issue of time very seriously and, to tell you the truth, better things can be achieved through the good use of time.

    I like it where you say:

    "Time waits for no one.
    Treasure every moment you have.

    You will treasure it even more when
    you can share it with someone special."

    This is true!

    I`m a new member of Eliteskills, I hope you can enjoy my poetry.

    One love,
    Teboho
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by Teboho Mochaoa | [ Reply to This ]
      That was tremendous. It was sheer beauty and I'm not over-reacting. It's one of those rare writings that you read taking in every word and are covered in goosebumps by the end.
    There is not much I can say about it, for when emotions are so deep and truth so obvious in a piece of writing, poetry, flow, and rhythm seem suddenly irrelevent.
    Thank you for posting this, I think it is a lesson we all know inside but we all forget until we are faced with life's many obstacles.
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by DeepDreamer2008 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like reading stuff that really makes you think of things in a different way, and makes you realize that maybe no matter how bad things are that someone else maybe going through worse. I need to find that someone special. good job. Tammy
    | Posted on 2005-10-27 00:00:00 | by homie1065 | [ Reply to This ]
      i dont care who wrote it.i likes things that make ya think.i lkie this.the value of something=is measured by the individual who wants it.a person whom already has it=not much value there.the world is in to big of a hurry=to stop and smell
    my sense of smell is amazing

    and wes all toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
      To realize how life changes in a moment...
    Try saving one...getting so close to them in the water...within grasp...and watching them go under...
    To realize how man can be so cruel to man...
    You survive... when all around are dying and falling like grains of wheat to the reaper...in the name of war...
    To realize timeless love...
    Love each woman as the own special diamond she is...one of a kind...rare...all faceted differently...all with their own brilliance...

    Just what popped to mind reading this work...
    ~Alan
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ]
      im really sorry and i dont mean to bursr your bubble but this write is not original. Ive seen the same thing going around on e-mail for atleast years. But you have added a bit. Yet thanks for putting it here its good sharing material
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Gautam | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good write

    It screams out that we need some positive energy in this world
    A true friend is worth so much to us
    We all need someone to confide in
    If I may add one more line to your poem
    To realize the valure of oneself
    Reach out and touch a wounded soul


    Take Care
    Ron


    please if you get a chance take a look at some of my poetry and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I really didnt understand the point of this wrighting entill the end i no its making the reader think but about what? what they can lose or what they should value it did flow togeather pritty well but always room to improve
    | Posted on 2005-10-26 00:00:00 | by Phil Eads | [ Reply to This ]


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