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    dots Submission Name: Cowboy Comes to Towndots
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    Author: Desi
    Elite Ratio:    3.88 - 210/151/34
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       I wrote this for just a Cowboy...


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    dotsCowboy Comes to Towndots
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    Riding into town, all tired tattered and thirsty,
    that wild and crazy Cowboy of mine.
    Bartender set up a round, of coke and Royal Crown.
    Dealer lay them down.
    Poker is the only game in this here town.
    A bet, a raise, as everybody plays.
    Thereís only one hand a winner here today.
    Players turn them up, Cowboy has, a Royal Flush.
    Leaving with a frown, as they ride out of town.
    Picking them up and laying them down.
    But, Iíll still be here horsing around,
    With that wild and crazy Cowboy of mine.




    Submitted on 2005-10-27 10:13:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sounds like a wild and crazy ride with this cowboy of yours. A poker player, a pro at this, he takes a drink, as they fill his glass, that's when he flashes his royal flush, beating everyone else in a flash. A good piece
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]


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