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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 300
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 1128
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    Where has my inspiration gone?,
    Is it locked away deep down inside me?,
    From where other yet unknown gifts and talents lye,
    To be unlocked at the perfect time,
    by the only one who has the key to the very door of my heart,
    I know I was made for more than how I'm living my life currently,
    When I look within me I want to see everything you've made as good,
    Just like a shining star from the heavens above,
    I wanna reach out and touch others lives with the things you God have given me,
    But is it possible when I feel my inspiration is no longer there, hurting inside, and feeling like i have nothing to give or offer,
    Only you know who I am on the outside but more Importantly in,
    When you look at me you smile with the purest pride and overflowing joy ever known,
    Because when you look inside your beloved creation,
    You see all the good, full potential, and maturing of who you have called me to be,
    While never casting me away because of the hidden and ugly things of my heart,
    Looking upon me with tender love, care and the greatest compassion ever seen,
    Lead me and carry me into your arms of love,
    So that I'll know you will always be my resting place,
    Where I can run when my heart is hurting and just find healing, true love, and warm peace,
    You are my heavenly father and eternal one,
    With you I can stop hiding and be who I am with you by my side,
    No longer faking, or pretending but being true to you and also to me,
    A restored, healed, beloved, and beautiful butterfly now set free,
    To live as a daughter of the king.




    Submitted on 2005-10-27 16:39:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well...I didn't know you were posting...

    Always have faith Lil C. The reasoning that so much has happened throughout Biblical times is because people lost faith. Nothing should tear you away from your relationship with God. NOTHING! He loves you and that is endless. You are His child and forever will be. You should always return that love no matter the cost.

    Have faith and always believe. Only He can guide you on the right path throughout life.

    Much love baby girl.

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      You have a talent. For choosing your words carefully. I don't know if i like the poem yet or not, still deciding, but i love the way it is written. I'm a frim believer in words speak louder than actions! i think i may be the only one..lol
    Good Write
    | Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by soul full | [ Reply to This ]


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