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    dots Submission Name: Mujerdots
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    Author: Big J
    ASL Info:    22/m/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 20/29/12
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 303
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 541



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    dotsMujerdots
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    In the devil's workshop ye shall find,
    A creation meant to warp the Human mind.
    Forged in magma and brought to life,
    Placed on earth to create strife.

    Hate and passion fuel its soul,
    Destroying mankind its only goal.
    Oh evil oh wicked demons of hell,
    Ye think ye can hide behind that vail.

    I've seen thy kind I know thy ilk,
    Sharp as a knife but smooth as silk.
    Oh, woman queen of earth,
    Thou hast sought our destruction since thy birth.




    Submitted on 2005-10-28 02:33:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yeah I quite like it too. I'm not such a big fan of the olde english language like "ye", it makes it a bit dusty and tiring. I didnt click onto the fact that it was women you were talking about and it was a nice twist when I did realise. Especially liked the "sharp as a knife but smooth as silk".
    Nice work
    | Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by Minos | [ Reply to This ]
      Cool Poem. I like everything about it. I'd love to give some critisism, but i can't find anything at all wrong with this. sorry..lol.. Great Job! Love to hear more from you.
    | Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by soul full | [ Reply to This ]



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