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    dots Submission Name: A Treatdots
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    Author: Poetic Cure
    ASL Info:    49.f.mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 313/137/33
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
    Total Views: 203
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 792



    Description:
       I hope this one is more liked than my Halloween write. The younger readers didnt like my adult version of Halloween. Which is ok. Let me know if you like this one.


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    dotsA Treatdots
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    Halloween what a treat.
    People dress up and creep.

    Kids in costumes racing
    from door to door,
    chanting “Trick or Treat”
    holding bags open for more.
    Reaping what they can carry and eat,
    whilst parents painlessly wait on the street.

    Jack o lanterns luminating on porches
    Waiting to scare who approaches

    Skeletons dancing in the air,
    Trying to bring on a scare.

    Witches flying low,
    ready to grab you.

    Witches flying high,
    waiting to catch a passer by.

    Even witches stuck in tree limbs.
    What happen to them?

    Scarecrows stuffed with straw
    Standing there in awe.

    Halloween what a treat




    Submitted on 2005-10-28 19:27:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was very good! I think it has enspired me to write something on halloween ? Well keep up the great work and kep them gasping.LOL
    And if you get a chance come read some of my stuff and tell me what you think.
    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea this one was a good thing from a little kids point a view. I personally liked the other one better other readers might like this one better but it's all good. This one did seem to be more clearer then the other one and this was also a good write.
    ~~Danni~~
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      I like, it describes Halloween from a kid's point of view, it's just what I needed, especially after what happened last night, on my birthday no less, but not everything can be fun and games...

    Keep smilin through the tears,
    Tai
    | Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by Siren Mengana | [ Reply to This ]
      this is cool. it's more laid back than ur other halloween write. personally i liked the other one better but this one has a lighter mood and is easier to understand. good job. u must love halloween to spend so much time writing about it.
    | Posted on 2005-10-28 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]



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