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So Sorry


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 90
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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Okay not that i ever broke anyones heart (i think) I wrote this poem in a point of view of someone who did and is sorry that they did. So tell me what you think.


So Sorry



Never ment to hurt you
I love you too much
but i did and i'm sorry
for putting you through pain

so sorry
so sorry

My fault that the one
who broke my heart came back
messed up the good thing we had
all because i couldn't let go

so sorry
so sorry

to hurtful were you painful crys
and when you said
everything i said were lies
guess that was a painful good bye

so sorry
so sorry
too sorry i broke your heart...




Submitted on 2005-10-29 10:31:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  um you had alot of typos in this pice. why would you write of something you'v never experianced. i dont get how people do things like that . write about things you know. not wish to know.
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sweet sorenity
| Posted on 2005-10-29 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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