So Sorry

Author: Poeticprincess ASL Info:    18/f/Germany Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104 Words: 90

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So Sorry

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Never ment to hurt you I love you too much but i did and i'm sorry for putting you through pain so sorry so sorry My fault that the one who broke my heart came back messed up the good thing we had all because i couldn't let go so sorry so sorry to hurtful were you painful crys and when you said everything i said were lies guess that was a painful good bye so sorry so sorry too sorry i broke your heart...

Submitted on 2005-10-29 10:31:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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um you had alot of typos in this pice. why would you write of something you'v never experianced. i dont get how people do things like that . write about things you know. not wish to know. xoxo sweet sorenity

| Posted on 2005-10-29 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]

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