Do not d
r
i
p tears and blood
from a M
a
s
s
a
c
r
e that does not end.
Stab through the E
y
e and pull out
Die.
Place your f
r
a
g
i
l
e hand before me,
you shall s
e
e what is truly
written.
Leave the p
i
e
r
c
i
n
g taunts;
soon w
i
c
k
e
d
n
e
s shall rot.
A journey now tremendous
from water and land,
the sky and the grass,
the ocean and the sand,
and bathe upon yourself
for there is no one else.
Submission Name: Eye (Revised)
context now, I dont quite get the eye and die part as far as it is worded in lines 13-16. you are welcome to explain that to me. i do like the creativeness here Jesi it's something different and lovely to look at. the last four lines too are pleasing to read, it changes tone from the rest of the write as well as breaking from the visual aspect of it too. good effect for that. great job! 
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