hey this is very pretty! i have always loved kites when i was younger i used to imagine that i was up there flying w/ it...actually i STILL do that (lol) which is prolly one of the reasons i like your poem! it shows im NOT the only one who has done that! my general rule of thumb=short sweet and to the point unless my pen decides otherwise thank-you! so dont worry 'bout how long it is! it's what's held within the length that counts!
btw when sumone gives you their honest opinion and it's not nessacarily(sp?) a good one it mite not be you, maybe it's just not their style. what i do is go 'n read some of their stuff to see where they're comming from then i usually feel better...a lot better! though MOST times i kin seee their point ;) but anyway write what pleases YOU...'K? good keep writttin' ~CJ~
I really liked this write To me you were referring to how a kite gets to float among the sky closerthen any of us will ever reach in this lifetime to Heaven I really liked this To me this is very spiritual and carrys true meaning Great Job!!! God Bless Ron