I think I'm getting a feal for your stuff, can't quite explain it, but none the less i do. You capture darkness and shroud it in light, only to be unveiled by the interpreter if such an aquisition is wished. At least that's my 2 cents, but it's apenny for my thoughts' and now you've more than that.
Another minimalistic piece that has such wonderful word choices that is needs no more. I dislike pieces that are so embellished that they lose sight of the meaning and leave us scratching our heads saying, "huh?"....This is lyrical, descriptive and caused many emotions to peek at me. I certainly favor this style of writing and usually follow this form myself. NICE!