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    dots Submission Name: Rise Back Updots
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    Author: withblindedeyez
    ASL Info:    19/m/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 83/121/58
    Words: 292
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 685
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1700



    Description:
       lyrics i wrote that i'm working on the rest of the music to it


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    dotsRise Back Updots
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    All your life
    Youíve been beaten and thrown down
    There words and like whips and chains
    You ignore them as long as you can, but in
    The end, you still get spit on and throw aside
    You canít let them hold you down

    Donít let the tears fall from your eyes
    Youíve got to, stand back up and fight
    Live this life, one step at a time
    If you fall, have strength to rise
    Back to your feet, walk again and youíll
    Never taste defeat.

    Make the sacrifice
    Rise back to your feet, dry your eyes
    You canít be beaten, your one of a kind
    Grab a hold of anything you can an fight
    Back, for every time they broke your life
    Let them know you wonít back down this time
    They wonít hold you down this time

    Donít let the tears fall from your eyes
    Youíve got to, stand back up and fight
    Live this life, one step at a time
    If you fall, have strength to rise
    Back to your feet, walk again and youíll
    Never taste defeat.

    This is for every time you hurt me
    For every time you spit and look down on me
    I always knew Iíd have the last laugh you see
    Your whips and chains can no longer harm me
    Itís time you taste the defeat.
    Your backing down and running away this time.

    No tears fall from these eyes,
    Iím here, and I will fight
    Live my life one step at a time
    If I fall, I have the strength to rise
    Back to my feet, walk this walk again
    I will never taste this defeat again.

    They wonít hold me down this time.





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      I needed to read these lyrics today, your words have given me inspiration to stand up and fight back. This is a great piece and I believe many people today need it. I love when poetry is put to music, It has such power. I hope to see more of your work.
    lynn
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      its all well and good with the falling and getting back up but it is a little monotnous and sorta unoriginal. but who am i anyway. maybe a little variance in thought or something. oh well, good job
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by disillusion | [ Reply to This ]


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