Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Taco Saladdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Unicrom
    ASL Info:    30/m/pacific northwest
    Elite Ratio:    4.81 - 116/71/110
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 710
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 431



    Description:
       A tourist discovers the joys of international cusine and complications of the international language barrier.

    Come now admit it if you travle this kinda stuff has to have happened to ya at least once.

    A true nightmare if you practice, Vegetarianism, Judism or are a muslim.

    Happy holloween.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTaco Saladdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Taco, It's a great dish.
    Taco, it fills my bowl.
    Taco, it tastes great.
    Taco, it satifies.
    Taco, it's only 4.99
    Taco, cause it's plentiful.
    Taco, mm mmm good.
    Taco, where can I get some more?
    Taco, a dish served in Japan.
    Taco, on sale now at the seafood market.
    Taco, cause a man whispers its asian secrets in my ear.
    TACO, IS OCTAPUSS!!!




    Submitted on 2005-10-30 01:03:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Well.....Got you to try something new didn't it? LOL! I think that this has happened to the majority of us. I know that I have eaten a few things....then afterwards....when it was revealed what contents were actually consumed I was looking like .

    But....it gets you to experience something new I guess. Octapus...does that taste kind of like squid? Or did they actually put the taco seasoning on it? LOL

    Good job with the humor!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-06-29 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good.

    It kind of lost me after I read it.

    But then I understood.....I think. (lol)

    Hum....it got me wanting a taco, thats for sure....but a veggie taco of course! :)

    Great job!
    | Posted on 2006-08-19 00:00:00 | by mysterious one | [ Reply to This ]
      haha. this was a good laugh. at first i thought you were talking bout taco from Mexico. you know the flat bread and u put stuff in the middle. when u said it was japanes i was like huh? what is this person talking bout? i'd say more but i need to go. bye

    suzi
    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by sushi wok | [ Reply to This ]
      lol! Ya..that has happened to me countless times. Of course, nothing beats when a person speaking a different language is hitting on you and you just nod your head having NO idea what he is saying! (Oh wasn't that an interesting story ) So..how was the Taco anyways?
    ~Kat
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem
    IT made me laugh

    It shows how the funny world of words can be put into any frame of mind for any person
    Just Like
    Poetry

    Take Care
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance take a look at my poetry and let me know what you think

    Thank you
    Ron
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Laugh, they tenderize it like the Italians do...smile...pretty good stuff eh?
    International cusine makes the world an interesting place. Beware of some Thai and Vietnamese dishes...smilez.
    Excellent write about experiences!

    ~Alan
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by MidnghtScorpion | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    79267

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry