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    dots Submission Name: Introducing Chaosdots
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    Author: The41stSmibble
    ASL Info:    19 male england
    Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 41/60/15
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 219
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 344



    Description:
       This is a three part poem


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    dotsIntroducing Chaosdots
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    Dusting off his heart,
    the fallen hero rises
    the villians laughter
    ceases to be
    Gun in hand
    soul in thought
    The rain pounds down
    the thunder mutes all
    the lightening brightens
    tears run down
    his cracked dry face
    this is the introduction
    of soon to be chaos.




    Submitted on 2005-10-30 14:46:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow. this is lovely. reminds me of a dream i had when i was a little kid(im a lucid dreamer) where i was a cowboy in a showdown.. it was a stange dream. there was cotton candy involved somewhere.. anyways i liked the poem.
    | Posted on 2005-11-12 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting. It has some very vague points, but I think that's what you were heading for. I really like it. The whole super hero-villian thing was really cool.
    Lata,
    Conqueror
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]
      Really smoothe...its all true by few words. One small thing can cause chaos. Make it seem real.

    <3 Bleeding Tears
    | Posted on 2005-10-30 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]



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