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    dots Submission Name: Eroticdots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 805
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       im in the mood for this poem?
    and when i am in the mood im in the mood for anything


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    dotsEroticdots
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    My mind screamed out "Make love to me"
    My body screamed out "Make love to me"
    He did more than that

    Without a word
    Without a thought
    He touched, licked, kissed, nibbled,
    and sucked on places that my body
    thought had lost feeling

    Passion, Desire, Lust
    He knew just what I wanted
    From the top of my head to the tip of my toes

    I shivered
    Cried out
    I whined with passion

    The rush of sensation passed through my body
    It made all the tiny hairs stand up on end
    Just a touch and all of my feeling came back to me
    >From just his touch

    I fell asleep that night - peaceful
    Only to awake the next morning and realize that he was already gone
    Just a dream
    I don't know; but when he comes back we shall start all over again.






    Submitted on 2004-04-20 11:47:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      woohoo, I really like this one, I am into the erotic stuff, but I write mostly vampire erotica, blood and sex entises me. this is good, really good, I would be pissed if it was only a dream, lol. now I want to go meet up with my boyfriend, lol. nice job.
    | Posted on 2004-04-20 00:00:00 | by ViCiOuSWrItEr | [ Reply to This ]
      ero-tic-a,
    now,i think i will take a nap.

    i like how you paragraghed,gave space between some actions.
    described the action of the lover and your reaction,that surly can be related with, had the reader had the invaluable experiance and even not,well,i can see it to be a inspireration to get some,,,,experiance
    yea,all the tiny hairs rose to, from (in my case)her touch.
    we the so lucky,adore these,
    some day i will have the guts to put my stubborn manhood away for a day and reveal the human side of my goosepimple thrill of having the one i have waited for touch me with her small boney hand,with fingernails painted to a delicate shade of sexy..if i could just stand the fact that i miss her so much.
    again thanx
    | Posted on 2004-04-24 00:00:00 | by paulie d | [ Reply to This ]



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