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    dots Submission Name: The Voice Of Seductiondots
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    Author: kellz
    ASL Info:    25/F/England
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 122/148/49
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 387
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    Bytes: 1807



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    dotsThe Voice Of Seductiondots
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    It was another lonely evening
    In another lonely bar
    When across the crowded gathering
    I see, there you are

    Intoxicating beauty and grace
    and poise
    Seemingly unaffected by the
    crowd and the noise
    I watched you deflect suitors
    by the dozen
    Hovering about and stalking you
    like a coven

    I sat and we talked and I no
    longer had a choice
    Uncommon beauty and a
    lively intelligence
    A rare combination beneath
    such a lovely countenance
    And, oh Lord, such an exquisite voice
    Low and breathy, full of promise
    The voice of seduction
    Eroticism, witticism, full of compassion

    A voice that prompts thoughts of
    Nights of wild abandon
    Of full moons.... Above warm tropical rains
    Of long moonlit walks on the sands
    Of fine wines and candlelit dinners
    Of mountain log cabins with crackling fires
    Of romantic destinations, nights
    filled by sighs

    A man whose conversation is an event
    Intelligent, inventive, romantic,
    and heaven-sent
    Knowledgeable about so many subjects
    With a voice that entrances sweet and direct
    A man's maturity and a littleboy's innocence
    Simple naivete and seductive tempter

    A complex man without a doubt
    A siren perhaps, singing to tout
    Chivalry, sensitivity, and romance
    Qualities begging for enhancement
    In women the world over
    Therefore the key to this man of myth
    Is to make sure that he is never bereft
    Of the qualities he so richly deserves
    Do this to ensure that his love
    will be preserved.





    Submitted on 2004-04-20 11:50:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmm....intresting again...deeply into a sexual emotion...and very real...I loved the way you worded it, it made the piece flow gently...there are again some rhyming issues, but that's for you to fix not me...otehr than that I loved this piece...
    ~Jaime Lee Pachétte~
    | Posted on 2004-04-20 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]



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