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    dots Submission Name: Bare Prayer Reflectionsdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Naked Darkness
    Bathing in Moonlight
    Twinkle toes
    dancing with Stars
    Aglow of Dawn
    budding with Life ~*~

    Morning Princess
    Illuminating Sight
    Love shows
    Venus & Mars
    Afternoon yawn
    Dream away strife

    Eternal Journey
    Always Home
    Smiles on "ITs" way

    Praying Bended Knee
    Faithful Spirit Roam
    Blessed is tHE way

    Submitted on 2005-10-31 13:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      What a wonderful poem! Very magickal and imaginative. I could see in my mind's eye dancing under the stars in the moonlight. It flows well and evokes such wonderful mental images. It makes me think of a moonlight night or a daydream on a rainy afternoon. I was already in a good mood when I read your poem but now I'm in a great mood.

    Great work!
    | Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by Toadslayer | [ Reply to This ]
      From night to day.. and back again. I get from this a couple in love, who enjoy life [and spirit] together, and "together" they are "always home".

    Also, I found this part to be magical >
    "Bathing in Moonlight
    Twinkle toes
    dancing with Stars"

    A lovely write :)

    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Describing by details the times of the day from darkness to dawn and back again. You brought out ones eternal journey as well. Loved it!
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      All roads lead to Rome they say. All roads also lead to home. Everyone and everything travel on a journey / cycle of life, but more often than not, home always beckons. When I read this I thought straight away of Dorothy in 'The Wizard Of Oz'. I know - I am nuts !
    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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