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    dots Submission Name: All Hallow Evendots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 8
    Class/Type: Haiku/Religious
    Total Views: 567
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    Bytes: 71

       A Halloween poem ~ shortened from All Hallow Even (eve of All Saints Day)

    Trick or treat!



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    dotsAll Hallow Evendots

    Enchanting Light Dance
    Mesmerizing Energy
    All Hallow Even

    Submitted on 2005-10-31 13:28:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You certainly give us the magic of halloween in this write. I so enjoyed this time when I was a child.. the magic, and energy of the night.
    This is nice. I enjoyed !
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice work....
    Now you may or may not know this but I am a sucker for the Haiku and anything that is religious.

    This indeed is a day to honor the dead.

    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      Short sweet and to the point as usual. I suspect that you like the mystery, and yet the fire and liveliness of Halloween and all that it entails.
    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I love haikus there so short but cause an impacting image. I wish more people wrote them.Have a happy all hallow even.Have you written any other haikus if you have i'd love to read them. please reply.
    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by smartblond | [ Reply to This ]
      Short but sweet!! Would be nice if there was more of it, but I guess thats the point of it being short and sweet!! Happy All Hallows Eve!! I'm in the Royal Navy and stuck out at sea!!! Hope your having a better Halloween!! Beckie x
    | Posted on 2005-10-31 00:00:00 | by Burnt Rose | [ Reply to This ]

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