I loved this. It decribed what having writers block feels like so well. At first I kind of pictured the poem like mine sort of. I wrote about not being able to write. But yours added more to it. You expressed how it feels to not be able to bring out the thoughts inside of you. And of course, anybody who writes has probably exprerienced this before.
i enjoyed this poem because there have been times in my life when i have felt exactly like this. You have potential to be writing like this at such a young age, you should keep it up.
this was very cool, and original (for me anyway) I never thought of writers block as a subject for verse. at the end I was thrown off when you say "when I can say", I would change that to write, if you can, I see your dilemma there. But this was really inventive. When I want to create but can't I just observe others creations-music, movies, book, TV, and I have been getting into reading poems online. Metal Heart74
It always comes out eventually ! A sound piece of self-reflection and self-realisation - well done. Just write when you are ready and not because you feel you have to. That is the key !
This happens to me so often. When I cant think of words to express myself actually its kind happening right now.lol. But anywayz this was good. I can finally relate to something. And finally something thats not about cutting ( you'd think these people would lose enough blood to just die already). wait that was mean nvm. but anywayz I liked you poem.
this was interesting (sorry I thought I'd read all urs) it reminds me of my "inspiration gone" u should check it out sometime it's realativly simaliar. good write...very ironic and yet explaintory. keep writing. Peace
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