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    dots Submission Name: look in the mirrordots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    Look in the majik mirror, what do you see
    The mirror shows your reality
    It doesn't lie, it tells the truth
    you are the product of your youth
    it shows your past, future and present
    where your life has gone since your first living second
    no matter what it shows this you should remember
    nothing is set in stone, don't be the pretender
    I know who you are, and I know what you wonder
    sometimes I wonder the meaning of thunder
    whos god and what does he want
    if we do fail him, is it us that he'll haunt
    it doesn't matter I'll find out one day

    Life is disappointing, and you soon will learn
    that the ones who you love the most, you aren't their concern
    the mirror shows my lonliness, my depression, it is deep
    slowly, my soul, out of my chest it seeps





    Submitted on 2005-10-31 21:13:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Life is disappointing, and you soon will learn
    that the ones who you love the most, you aren't their concern

    Hey what did u mean by this? I know what u meant bout life bein disappointin but what did u mean bout the other. You wrote this before u had problems with Brit didn't u? N-E-ways this was really good. I especially liked the part bout the mirror telling the truth and all that. Laterz.

    Angel
    | Posted on 2006-06-27 00:00:00 | by ForsakenAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      This was very deep and insightful. I liked the words of wisdom you gave. They have more value than gold. I am very happy I read this and plan to read more of your work. It seem more like a poem then lyrics to me. But that's just fine because I can see this as a acustic song as well. A fine write indeed.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! Now this...was deep! I truly loved this one! You gave it such character. I could really see some mystical person saying this...

    And I guess that mystical person is you!

    This was true talent showing here...you definitely deserved more props then you received for this one!

    This is BY FAR a fave!

    Much love!

    Li
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      one of your most meaningful and contemplative flows that i've read. this was good. this write actually had a lot to do with ur name. that's cool too. yo justin this [censored] was killa
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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