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Firefly


Author: BleedingTears
ASL Info:    16/f/Neverland
Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 418 /289 /62
Words: 262
Class/Type: Lyrics /
Total Views: 1358
Average Vote:    5.0000
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Description:

dont wanna explain unless you ask...


Firefly


We take our next step heading down a path.
Tell me where im going
Tell me when to stop.
Is falling for you on the right path?
Are you part of my agenda?
If so, please tell me I've done right.
Make me a list of your suicide attempts.
Tell me your story of breaking hearts.
I can't sleep a wink without a stab, directed at my heart and eyes
I've been marking the days since I've started this mess

Can you be my firefly tonight?
Can you please light my way through the darkness?
Will you be my little firefly?
Can you show me the right direction?
Will you be my little firefly?

Show me your fire sparks.
I want to see you guiding me
Light the way before me.
We can keep running like we're unwanted.
Will you be my little firefly?

[chorus]
Can you be my firefly tonight?
Can you please light my way through the darkness?
Will you be my little firefly?
Can you show me the right direction?
Will you be my little firefly?

I want to see my little firefly shine before my eyes.
I want to see it happen
I want to see it glow
You're the only one that brings light to my life.

[chorus 2x]
Can you be my firefly tonight?
Can you please light my way through the darkness?
Will you be my little firefly?
Can you show me the right direction?
Will you be my little firefly?

Are you still my firefly?




Submitted on 2005-11-01 18:26:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This would make a great song! It flowed really well! Great write, hope to read more from you.
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2007-11-14 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this! i like how u used firefly about finding light and stuff! it made me kinda sad though! but its ok! i loved it good joB!
~akaila evonne~
this is a song rite?
| Posted on 2005-11-30 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really good-different from your usual stuff, so that one genre doesn't get too saturated. (though stilll a bit dark and dreary) anyway, excellent stuff (As usual).

Storm
| Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked the first stanza the most. i won't lie it was confusing. i won't ask u what happened either becuz it's none of my business and it sounds personal. yeah when i saw the title i didn't know what this poem would be about. i love the way u used the firefly to symbolize the guiding light u need to travel down the darkest paths.
| Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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