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    dots Submission Name: Picture Perfect Rejectiondots
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    Author: Black-Wall
    ASL Info:    19 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 60/85/48
    Words: 376
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Mirror or Mask
    Total Views: 254
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    Bytes: 2162



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       Dont know what I was feeling.


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    dotsPicture Perfect Rejectiondots
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    Its good to see that you hold the gun to me so easy, one word spoke was the last thought crossing through my mind. The distance between the bullet was like the sun as it fades, in the distance of every echoing memory of a failing love, a failing love.
    Twas the rolling of the eyes a signal of your mind squandering on all that was left between you and us all. Shove the barrel in my face, flex the trigger, make sure its good and tight, because I wont give up with out a fucking fight.

    I cant breathe, I cant seem to take myself to become, a photo perfect lover of some sort. I cant think, of another reason why you seem so beautiful, a picture perfect rejection.

    Maybe I could give this another, shot to my forehead, the words you spoke passed through me, leaving a shimmering crimson wave of love spent around the time I looked into your eyes, hatred for another, you cry out to me, you are never happy.
    How can I trace the path of your heart, when you sent it straight through me, tearing my cold and lifeless heart in half, I can see your eyes are caculated by half of the lucky seven, falling tears, like a shimmering roluett wheel, I land on zero and lose it all, tell me why I cant help but fall?

    Taken from another, love long and lost

    I cant breathe, I cant seem to take myself to become, a photo perfect lover of some sort. I cant think, of another reason why you seem so beautiful, a picture perfect rejection.

    No matter what
    Cant hold on me.
    I feel the death of another rejection

    Open up
    Just open up

    Trust me

    I say

    OPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEN UP
    Opeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen Up

    Darling Open Up

    Dont say it
    Dont say it
    Dont say it is the end of you.

    I cant breathe, I cant seem to take myself to become, a photo perfect lover of some sort. I cant think, of another reason why you seem so beautiful, a picture perfect rejection.

    This was a picture perfect rejection







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