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    dots Submission Name: Within The Darkdots
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    Author: vampire
    ASL Info:    18 y/o female, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 16/16/6
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsWithin The Darkdots
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    Tonight lies a sadness within the dark.
    I have read over time, within my heart.
    Tonight tears flow for secrets unkept;
    A tale of lost love and eyes that wept,
    And weep now for the pain, still agony here,
    A silence, not a whisper, shadows of fear
    And the vibrant ignorance lined in a face—
    Speaks of misunderstanding, the loss of grace.
    There can be no light, the past is past,
    Those memories are a wraith, only to last
    While this darkest ache, looms within—
    Memories of you, and the places we’ve been.




    Submitted on 2005-11-02 18:23:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great job! It was perfect! This piece is amazing!
    It flowed well, it was worded greatly. Simple yet so meaningful. Keep up the awesome qork.

    >:D
    | Posted on 2005-11-04 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]



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