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    dots Submission Name: Disfigureddots
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    Author: vampire
    ASL Info:    18 y/o female, Australia
    Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 16/16/6
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Such silent tears they issue forth
    Reflecting naught but fear,
    A fear of misunderstanding,
    Of love and hope, each tear
    Falling as a quiet one
    When breath doth come no more,
    When blood no longer colours
    Youth’s bloom as was before.
    Amid the torturous babble
    Confusion distinguishes light,
    The sounds that move about me
    Are the deeper sounds of night.
    And pressed down against the soil
    These words sever though my heart,
    Words of misunderstanding
    Disfiguring the beauty that thou art.
    Like blades of molten fury
    You name it haunts me still
    Moaning through the darkened walls
    Cries madness, wild and shrill.




    Submitted on 2005-11-03 06:51:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good job. excellent wording. it sounds kinda like you loved someone and you are talking about how much they still haunt you. i may be wrong but good job
    | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by tomboy | [ Reply to This ]



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