Awwww... Raivn...I loved this so so much...every thing here was so accurate...the part about reading books about mental disorders so I wont go insane...that ment a lot to me...I started crying half way through this poem...The ending though...it made me smile...it made me proud also...I am stopping all of that...I am glad I can...I'm changing my life for the better...I am glad that you recognise that...Thankyou so very very much for the poem Raivn...I loves you...
was an enjoyable read.ryme and format was flawless if thats important 2 you. u painted a picture nicely with great imagery.its sad that we grow up way 2 fast because of other inadequaties.peoples selfishness is to blame=god help us all. talent u posses=i think ya already know
You absolutely captured her perfectly...I especially liked the part about her listening to music from another time...I love her so much she is such and inspiration to me...but hey don't worry you are too ;)
This feels like a companion piece to your other post about emotional coldness and emptiness. However, as sad as this tragedy is, it seems much more hopeful in its concluding lines as she 'takes off her cloak of shame' for the purpose of embracing her muse. Only someone who's been this desparate can know the comfort and release words can provide.